Pumpkin Escobar@lemmy.worldtoLemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world•Anyone notice how Brian Thompson dies and suddenly aliens start attacking?English
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23 hours ago- Prone shooting position, check
- Bipod firmly on the ground, check
- Aim at drone overhead, shit…
Yeah, I phrased that poorly, I was painfully aware of the Haitians eating cats BS, I meant this more like “why wait until the last paragraph to drop that key bit of information?” Clumsy writing / story structure at the very least.
Why is the fact that she’s a us citizen in the last paragraph?
EDIT: I phrased this poorly, I meant, why hold that information back until the last paragraph? That’s sort of the key part of the story.
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