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  • KevinFRK@lemmy.worldtoPhotography@lemmy.worldSwans
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    20 days ago

    Nice dream.

    Mmm, you want that much sky and that sort of width, so I can see why you end up with that amount of blurred stuff at the bottom to balance the sky.

    It’s pointless saying "Take the shot from somewhere else with a foreground that works better: the swans will be where they will be, and having the headland fade into the sea between the two swans seems right, setting the angle.

    My only suggestions are to trim the bottom as much as your artistic sense allows (but I guess you’ve done that), and perhaps brighten and flatten it towards the photos average to de-emphasize it. Maybe vignette?









  • No! A lesson I learned a long time ago: you definitely take this shot, it is interesting enough in its own right (more than enough!). Then you continue to watch the birds, finger on the trigger, and if you are lucky there will be a later better pose, but just as likely, they fly off :)

    Always take what is put in front of you, and then optimistically ask for “More!”



  • This is really interesting to compare and contrast with the original, each has its considerable virtues.

    This one has the bird really pop the moment you look at it, but then a realisation creeps up behind saying this looks a bit false, a bit like a model of a bird that you’ve lit and photoed in a studio, rather than a live bird out in the wild. In contrast, Tempus Fugit’s edit takes a little more time to appreciate, but then feels far more like a bird in its environment, with its colours more in tune with the background, and the wider crop helping with that.

    Now, magazine photos (or, as you say, scrolling on a phone) need that “pop”, they’ve so little time to keep you on the page.

    It’s the “in its environment” feel that I personally prefer for my bird photographs (if I did, e.g., portraits, my choices would be very different), and so I’ve not invested the effort in learning how to get birds to “pop”, but it’s very much a matter of taste and purpose. I still mess with global luminance, but that’s because I might know better than my camera a good light curve.

    In passing, I feel a little regret you didn’t have the RAW format form to play with (which might well be why your edits saw the colour noise).


  • KevinFRK@lemmy.worldtoPhotography@lemmy.worldChristmas Tree
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    1 month ago

    Picture worked (and worked well) in the end. Commonest cause for me is that there are file size (or possibly simply pixel number) limits in Lemmy. From time to time I have to resize the photo to get it posted. If you are lucky the “broken upload” image in Lemmy contains a hint of the reason.




  • Do you shoot RAW format photos? If so, I’d try looking at your luminance curve/tone histogram/whatever your software calls it. Any photo with a lot of sky and a lot of dark stuff tends to leave the dark stuff too dark - with a histogram tool, just applying to the whole photo, you should be able to brighten up the dark stuff, revealing more detail, without doing too much harm to the sky. Then your classic framing will be better rewarded.

    Or take an entirely different approach and work out when the sun will be in the best position to light up the scene naturally.

    Monopods (or indeed tripods, or even just bracing against walls) matched with slower speeds might also reveal more detail.