• 🔍🦘🛎@lemmy.world
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    8 months ago

    Generally, you only use one emphasized word/phrase per sentence, otherwise the entire thing feels stilted and unnatural.

    In panel 3, the only word that really needs to be bolded is “true”; the rest of them just break the flow.

    • TheFriar@lemm.ee
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      8 months ago

      Eh, I’d disagree. And I think this is where it becomes a matter of taste. When I see it, I read it with the emphasis in my head. It does add something for me. Maybe because I choose to do my writing similarly, that this sort of matters to me. You’re probably right that a lot of people overlook it. To each their own, I guess.